This is the best time of my life........

          WALT improve our writing by carefully checking our sentences and trying to add descriptive language.

I think that I need to learn more about descriptive language and how to become better at punctuation. I will try my best learning it.

                                 Going to JUMP in auckland.

Yay were going to  AUCKLAND!!! when me my  sisters and my dad .got to Auckland like at 3AM in the morning. My aunty and uncle was asleep anyways when it was

the morning. My aunty already picked my cousins up then she picked us up. after that we got to JUMP I was  getting excited and running around in the carpark. We got into JUMP and then I saw

millions of people. Yelling and playing and did you know I was one of them by the way we

had to listen to the instructions.After all that we got to jump on the trampolines we got to jump in

the foam pit. And even there were long as poles and you had to climb it it was so scary but I just

ran it after one hour we had to go my dad was waiting for me in the carpark and then we went to mcdonalds to eat because I was hungry after that we went back to my aunty’s and uncles and

played then my dad and I went to avondale to go get our toys……..Day 2…

The next day My papa and my cousins and I went to kmart to get some more toys.after

shopping at kmart my dad and my sisters and I went back to my aunty’s and uncles to get our bags and headed back to my other auntys house  to have a sleep……...Day 3………… after we went to my auntys guess what happend we had to go back home it was so boring I will never forget that day never never never…… and I wish that moment would never end I thought………….