Kai ora Manaaki-Tia, It's me Kohl-lee. I really enjoyed your hook. I was wondering what happen. I hate going to the doctors too, but after I got a treat. This reminds me of when I was really sick and I had to wait along time until I could see the Nurse. Keep up the good work. Blog you later.
Hello Mannaki-Tia This hook really made me get interest.In the beginning I was like what was wrong with her and then I kept reading then you said your throught hurt and you coughed and coughed I knew you were sick but thats a good thing you went to see the doctors to check your throught because sore throughts matter a lot and it can cause strip aid. This reminds me of when my throught hurted like so bad I drank a lot and thought it would be better but it didn't so I told my mum to take me to the doctors and I had the yuckiest medicine I have ever had. I don;t have any problem of your story but I have to go now bye. -Marta
Hi manaaki-tia great work on your hook it really gave me a good explanation of what you are doing. Next time manaaki-tia I think you can add a bit more.But I love this one This reminds me of when kohl-lee had that bug.And also manaaki-tia I do agree with you with the smell blog you later.
Kai ora Manaaki-Tia, It's me Kohl-lee. I really enjoyed your hook. I was wondering what happen. I hate going to the doctors too, but after I got a treat. This reminds me of when I was really sick and I had to wait along time until I could see the Nurse. Keep up the good work. Blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHello Mannaki-Tia This hook really made me get interest.In the beginning I was like what was wrong with her and then I kept reading then you said your throught hurt and you coughed and coughed I knew you were sick but thats a good thing you went to see the doctors to check your throught because sore throughts matter a lot and it can cause strip aid. This reminds me of when my throught hurted like so bad I drank a lot and thought it would be better but it didn't so I told my mum to take me to the doctors and I had the yuckiest medicine I have ever had. I don;t have any problem of your story but I have to go now bye. -Marta
ReplyDeleteHi manaaki-tia great work on your hook it really gave me a good explanation of what you are doing. Next time manaaki-tia I think you can add a bit more.But I love this one This reminds me of when kohl-lee had that bug.And also manaaki-tia I do agree with you with the smell
ReplyDeleteblog you later.